Thursday, 18 September 2014

Finished Article

First, after the debate in the media classroom in which we had to argue "for or against piracy", we all had to make a article based on whether piracy is good or bad, by going off and researching, alongside the fact that our teacher told us to have both sides of the argument, so our article wouldn't turn out to be biased. Furthermore, I included the artists and included on their views of piracy, (i.e. Naughty Boy thinks its okay, whereas John Newman finds it disgusting) In my opinion, I found my article quite colourful and effective background that blends in with the text, although I think there are some improvements that can be made.

2 comments:

  1. Rafa, you have considered the positive and negative aspects of piracy and music downloading and have included your own opinions and a quote or two. Make sure you read over your work before you publish it. Also you must consider layout more carefully and look at professional magazines in oreder to understand the conventions. Columns, fonts, colours and images need to be more carefully thought about. Good first piece.

    Amy

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  2. I have marked and commented on your evaluation, please can you upload this to your blog (or copy and paste the text into a blog post). It needs have clearer goals set and you must read over work to make sure it makes sense. Time to focus on the courseework!

    Amy

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