Overall, the structure of your DPS is good and I can clearly see the separation the answer and the question which makes it a lot clearer for me to read it. To improve, you should have included a pull quote somewhere next to the picture to make it more appealing.
your DPS is very appealing and the color scheme stands out. however in your journalism you use a lot of slang therefore it makes it slightly unprofessional. also the fact that your title stands out and catches the audience's attention.
Overall, the structure of your DPS is good and I can clearly see the separation the answer and the question which makes it a lot clearer for me to read it. To improve, you should have included a pull quote somewhere next to the picture to make it more appealing.
ReplyDeleteyour DPS is very appealing and the color scheme stands out. however in your journalism you use a lot of slang therefore it makes it slightly unprofessional. also the fact that your title stands out and catches the audience's attention.
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