Evaluation for piracy

Evaluation of my article

From the feedback I have received from the article, I believe that the article is supportive in which I have a strong argument on why piracy is not such a terrible thing as people justify it is from the research I have been assigned to do, although from what I think the article could be a little more professional Throughout the article, my language is mainly formal to target the audience at the age of 13-20. The target audience for The Sun, the article I did, would mainly be for children and adults, because it is for them to understand the text and get the message. One celebrity in my article is Naughty Boy because he is an artist. Although my article seemed effective and the layout is organised, the colour is way too colourful, the page seems like a newspaper, so the improvement that could be done is to make the article just simple.

One of my strengths in my research are for starters, is the research on when piracy began, and lead to people download illegal music; this makes the reader understand, the effects in my words. This will give the reader to give opinions, whether piracy is good or bad. On the other hand, the research proves to be unreliable as the text in my article is shown not to be detailed and it gives out a biased, un-balanced information. This was my first time using in design. At first, I found it hard, but it eventually got easier to get used to how to operate InDesign. One of my strengths in Design, were that I knew some of the tools, because it was similar to Photoshop I slightly knew how to use to tools. However, the weakness in my article shows not to have page numbers and the pictures show to be squished.

Following the feedback I received, after designing a questionnaire, my article managed to meet the criteria, despite the cons. The positive is received through the feedback is that it was a formal text and the layout is organised, although the improvement of my article could be the fact that there could be a limited amount of text, not too long, and make the article quite simple. Furthermore, I feel like my article could interact with the audience to connect with them.