The comments on my magazine and content cover

1. zahra mastan9 October 2014 12:11

   your magazine cover is very appealing and eye catching as you have used a lot of different colors in your magazine, also the information you have given is very useful and gives a insight of the magazine.
   furthermore, you have certain text which overlaps the image, this is seen as unusual and quite unique however there is still little room for improvement such as organizing cover lines and lining them up on the side.
   overall, well done! and a excellent job with your front cover

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   Thanzila Islam10 October 2014 03:27

   You have a wide range of colours used on the fonts which makes the font stand out. You photography skill are good as the eye contact from the guys on the cover engages with the audience. You have experimented with the layout of the font which is very creative and unique as some fonts are slightly slanted.

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   frehman13 October 2014 06:18

   The use of different tag lines are really appealing and tell a lot about the contents inside the magazine and they catch attention. what could be improved if you used less of the tagline and had cut out the image of the student to make it look more professional

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   Latifa13 October 2014 06:44

   The front cover which you have created is very appealing and will attract college students, this will be because of the colours and models use. The models are posing in a way college student would. To add to this the text is well written and is written in a context which students can relate to, however to criticise i think that the text should have been organised differently.

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   Dilara Kartal13 October 2014 06:51

   Good magazine cover Raf, you've used a various different colours which makes you magazine appealing and eye catching, the choice of colours relate to the theme of the magazine. However, I believe you could have placed your text in more appropriate place, for example the yellow text on the the yellow top isn't eligible

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   AS MEDIA13 October 2014 07:17

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   Kedeidra Joyce13 October 2014 07:22

   Your magazine cover is effective at standing out as there is a range of different colours used.You have used many conventions of a magazine such as a barcode and cover lines however to give your magazine a more professional look it would have been better to have the sidelines all going horizontally. Great work Raf.

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8. 1. zahra mastan13 October 2014 06:38

      Your content page is amazing and very appealing, it also shows a picture of a typical college student. the font of the cover page is very colourful however it needs to be more organised as i believe columns should be used to make it more professional.
      you also haven't stated the links of the Facebook/ twitter as you showed a picture instead which is not really helpful for the audience.

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      Latifa13 October 2014 06:40

      Your contents page can be related to college students because of your image; the text is good however the text should have been a different colour or font because it's hard to read. the Facebook and Twitter images could have been presented better.

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      Thanzila Islam13 October 2014 06:41

      your image has been manipulated really well and looks friendly which will engage the reader more. To improve try playing around with the colour scheme to see what colours work well together.

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